I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Hollie I really like your work about having good friends and having close friends I like how your title match's the back of the slideshow I think maybe next time you should change the first slideshow to a different colour because it didn't really mix together great work
Hey Hollie, Nirvana Here I really like your work about having good friends and how important it is to have friends that are close to your and friends that are not. Maybe next time Make more sense in your post. But this it. Blog you later. Nirvana
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Hi Hollie
ReplyDeleteI really like your work about having good friends and having close friends I like how your title match's the back of the slideshow I think maybe next time you should change the first slideshow to a different colour because it didn't really mix together great work
- Emma
Hey Hollie, Nirvana Here
ReplyDeleteI really like your work about having good friends and how important it is to have friends that are close to your and friends that are not. Maybe next time Make more sense in your post.
But this it.
Blog you later.
Nirvana