This week in writing we wrote a six-sentence story about creating a Carter and adding details. Our focus was on creating sentences. We learnt that four criteria of a sentence are... Making sure it makes sense. Must have only one idea. start with a capital letter and ends in a full stop. Leave spaces in between each words. I found it easy is to write it. What I found hard was to try descriptive it. Hope you like it..!
Once upon a time there was a girl and her name was Lexi. Lexi lives in a dark black forest Lexis talent was to climb trees. Lexi had a broken leg so she could not get around that easy. Lexi felt sad because Lexis friends got to clime trees but she didn't and that was her favorite thing to do.But then she went for a walk and then came across a magic house and the witch had magic that could help people so she help Lexi. The END!
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