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Thursday 14 March 2019

The program

Today in writing we used a picture prompt to create a lipogram. A lipogram is a sentence without using on particular letter. We had to write one interesting sentence describing the picture without using the letter ´ i ´. I found the describing easy and the trying to find word´s with out the letter ,i, .

Here My story... There was a dragon that had a flame of hot smoke that bowled out of the dragons mouth. 💥😈💣
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  1. AnonymousApril 10, 2019 11:50 am

    Hi Hollie,

    I like how you used descriptive words in your writing like flame. Maybe next time you can put in instead of smoke it can maybe be steam if you like that more. What happens to the dragon after the cooking what did it do?

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